Merge "Trivial grammar fixes to the upgrade guide"

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@ -19,18 +19,19 @@ In-band Inspection
If you used in-band inspection with **ironic-discoverd**, you have to install If you used in-band inspection with **ironic-discoverd**, you have to install
**python-ironic-inspector-client** during the upgrade. This package contains a **python-ironic-inspector-client** during the upgrade. This package contains a
client module for in-band inspection service, which was previously part of client module for the in-band inspection service, which was previously part of
**ironic-discoverd** package. Ironic Liberty supports **ironic-discoverd** the **ironic-discoverd** package. Ironic Liberty supports the
service, but does not support its in-tree client module. Please refer to **ironic-discoverd** service, but does not support its in-tree client module.
Please refer to
`ironic-inspector version support matrix `ironic-inspector version support matrix
<http://docs.openstack.org/developer/ironic-inspector/install.html#version-support-matrix>`_ <http://docs.openstack.org/developer/ironic-inspector/install.html#version-support-matrix>`_
for details on which Ironic version can work with which for details on which Ironic versions can work with which
**ironic-inspector**/**ironic-discoverd** version. **ironic-inspector**/**ironic-discoverd** versions.
It's also highly recommended that you switch to using **ironic-inspector**, It's also highly recommended that you switch to using **ironic-inspector**,
which is a newer (and compatible on API level) version of the same service. which is a newer (and compatible on API level) version of the same service.
The discoverd to inspector upgrade procedure: The discoverd to inspector upgrade procedure is as follows:
#. Install **ironic-inspector** on the machine where you have #. Install **ironic-inspector** on the machine where you have
**ironic-discoverd** (usually the same as conductor). **ironic-discoverd** (usually the same as conductor).
@ -40,13 +41,13 @@ The discoverd to inspector upgrade procedure:
`example.conf `example.conf
<https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/ironic-inspector/tree/example.conf>`_. <https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/ironic-inspector/tree/example.conf>`_.
The file name is provided on command line when starting The file name is provided on the command line when starting
**ironic-discoverd**, and the previously recommended default was **ironic-discoverd**, and the previously recommended default was
``/etc/ironic-discoverd/discoverd.conf``. In this case, for the sake of ``/etc/ironic-discoverd/discoverd.conf``. In this case, for the sake of
consistency it's recommended you move the configuration file to consistency it's recommended you move the configuration file to
``/etc/ironic-inspector/inspector.conf``. ``/etc/ironic-inspector/inspector.conf``.
#. Shutdown **ironic-discoverd**, start **ironic-inspector**. #. Shutdown **ironic-discoverd**, and start **ironic-inspector**.
#. During upgrade of each conductor instance: #. During upgrade of each conductor instance:
@ -78,8 +79,8 @@ your Nova and Ironic services are as follows:
nova-compute if necessary. nova-compute if necessary.
Note that during the period between Nova's upgrade and Ironic's upgrades, Note that during the period between Nova's upgrade and Ironic's upgrades,
instances can still be provisioned to nodes, however, any attempt by users instances can still be provisioned to nodes. However, any attempt by users to
to specify a config drive for an instance will cause error until Ironic's specify a config drive for an instance will cause an error until Ironic's
upgrade has completed. upgrade has completed.
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