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<title>Example Architectures</title>
<title>Architecture Examples</title>
<para>To understand the possibilities OpenStack offers, it's best to start
with basic architectures that are tried-and-true and have been tested in
production environments. We offer two such examples with basic pivots on the
<para>To understand the possibilities that OpenStack offers, it's best to start
with basic architecture that has been tested in
production environments. We offer two examples with basic pivots on the
base operating system (Ubuntu and Red Hat Enterprise Linux) and the
networking architectures. There are other differences between these two
examples, but you should find the considerations made for the choices in
each as well as a rationale for why it worked well in a given
environment.</para>
networking architecture. There are other differences between these two
examples and this guide provides reasons for each choice made.</para>
<para>Because OpenStack is highly configurable, with many different back ends
and network configuration options, it is difficult to write documentation
that covers all possible OpenStack deployments. Therefore, this guide
defines example architectures to simplify the task of documenting, as well
defines examples of architecture to simplify the task of documenting, as well
as to provide the scope for this guide. Both of the offered architecture
examples are currently running in production and serving users.</para>
<tip>
<para>As always, refer to the <xref linkend="openstack_glossary" /> if you
are unclear about any of the terminology mentioned in these
architectures.</para>
are unclear about any of the terminology mentioned in architecture
examples.</para>
</tip>
<xi:include href="section_arch_example-nova.xml" />
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<xi:include href="section_arch_example-neutron.xml" />
<section xml:id="example_archs_conclusion">
<title>Parting Thoughts on Architectures</title>
<title>Parting Thoughts on Architecture Examples</title>
<para>With so many considerations and options available, our hope is to
provide a few clearly-marked and tested paths for your OpenStack